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Rosy Enchatinx  Preview by RosyBloom-Chan Rosy Enchatinx  Preview by RosyBloom-Chan
This is a preview of Rosy Enchantix so far. I've been working on it for about a week. I'm working on the hair now. I still need to make the wings.

Rosy Enchantix Design By: *Cristalinawinx:iconcristalinawinx: at [link]
Art By: ME! THIS TIME IT'S ALL ME!
Used: My own Base :P
THE FULL VERSION WILL COME OUT SOON! I hope...

Critique: Please help me know what I still see to work on before I get to far and what's good so far :)
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:iconcolorwonders:
It's actually not that bad for a beginner, but there are still some kinks that could be worked out.
Here's what you could improve on:

the background looks kinda goofy unless that's what you're trying to convey. It doesn't seem to fit this particular character. Her outfit is very colorful, but then it would make sense to have a more plain background so to have the focus be more on the character.

On other thing is her hair. Have you ever seen someone in person with hair like this? It just looks unnatural, as if it were painted on. She doesn't even have ears, and that makes her look inhuman. I suggest studying from real life and also checking out some tutorials.
Here are some tutorials that may help you : [link] , [link] , [link] , [link]

(just one last thing; she has no eyebrows. Not sure if that was intentional but just thought I should let you know.)
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I love this! The colors are bold and they are nice together. I love how you've added the bold ruffles against the pastel colors.

However, I think the colors may be a bit TOO vibrant. If you maybe give the gloves more of a pastel color, and lighten up the ruffles, it would look a bit better.

I think the forehead may be a bit big. Try adding more hair over her forehead. And you may have forgotten the eyebrows =P

I also think you may have separated the colors in the ruffles a bit much... maybe find a way so that the colors coordinate better with each other... So it's not too choppy. (Did I use that word right? =P)

Your technique is good, but I think the line work could be better if you used a bit thicker lines. (Just a tad bit thicker). Also, the ruffles could use some shading, it makes them look less flat. Oh and maybe try lining up the eyes so they aren't as uneven.

Her hair could use a bit of wavy volume and bounce, too... not such straight lines. Hair needs movement, and flow!

Overall, looks good, but could use improvement :)
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:iconnaomiwinx100:
wow i meant to add that as a critique oh well :P
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:iconnaomiwinx100:
wow its amazing! so beautiful, instead of the whole gimp thing i would love to see the picture by itself :D but i still luv it i hope the wings match the backround and the art and could u maybe add some eyebrows? and make the eye lashes more bigger? that would REALLY make it a blast! also the nose is a bit too close to the lips, btw could u add more hair she sorta looks bald XD but overall its all still beautiful, just practice even more and you'll be as good as the best :D
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RosyBloom-Chan Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. I'm still working on it though. I'll post without the whole Paint.NET thinggy when it's done. I'm doing a little Manga work for fun...
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